"Taking Candy From a Baby" edited

My last post about Survivor was really bad, so I am making mass edits. By the way, for anyone interested, to do a strikethrough, you put "strike" in these brackets, "<" and to end, have those brackets contain "/strike" like this.
By the way, I know my earlier posts aren't as good as they could be, so if I could get comments on what I should fix, it would be helpful.
P.S. I will move all the strikethrough text to the bottom of the page to avoid confusion.
P.P.S. Actually, I'll just remove all the bad parts, so it will be changed considerably.